Trying to fathom Life
God is in coma Suspended in the netherworld Birds in flight trapped Chained to their wings Darkness is the Prince Enslaved to human whims Angels have evolved They call themselves “Men” “Amen” transmogrified to “Ah! Men!” Religion is blasphemy God is still in coma And heaven nowhere! Eternity is mortal Angels have proclaimed Time is numbered Infinity is a stone-throw away And God is eternal And God is infinite And God is still in coma While the Angels play!
What stayed with you?
A line that lingered, a feeling, a disagreement. Great comments are as valuable as the original piece.
Responses2
Life's inexplicable is god Life's insecurities is god And god is the ultimate scapegoat! God, the rollercoaster madness or our lives. by hemant on December 26, 2001 (Wednesday) Hi Nilanjana, I'm your fan! You write beautiful stuff. I've asked this question before, "Did God make Man, or Did Man make God?" There are other questions in my mind... "Can God be personified?" Well, the coma of God does not erase faith and hence, we keep coming back for more. You have a gift. Please email me: honestabdul@hotmail.com Hemant.
Thanks Hemant. We have started to believe in "comatosed" god so much that we have stopped believing in ourselves. God is the strength behind "the theory of everything"! I will mail you later regarding this rather "volatile" issue.
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