I did my graduation, thought of doing post graduation , therefore I posted myself the degree....
I somehow got my first date. The girl of my dreams..ill meet.
Finally somehow got her into meeting me,obviously after some million requests over chat sessions on the internet, word play, with rose emoticons and loads of smileys.
We decide the menu to eat and all that .We decided the date to meet and all that. We decided the time and all that. And then finally we decided the place and all that. Outside “Pizzeria” we will meet and all that.I stood outside churchgate pizzeria , probably she is there still waiting for me outside Bandra pizzeria.
Never heard from her again..and all that.
What stayed with you?
A line that lingered, a feeling, a disagreement. Great comments are as valuable as the original piece.
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hey prateek, your story's funny, but you could have been more creative... you kinda gave away the ending too soon. Either make it funny, or make it dramatic... if you mix them, mix them good. anyway, peace out!
thanks for ur rightful advice.,.. but thenim not a very creative writer..this pizzeria thing was a real incident in my life....since it was reallyvery short and funny and it got over so soon ..therfore i couldnt write more. thanks for reading anyways and all that :)
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