mmmmm...just read it.
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What stayed with you?
A line that lingered, a feeling, a disagreement. Great comments are as valuable as the original piece.
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hi types, i was just reding this thing again and i found one line very awkward to read and i could not agree with it .it was "healed by disappearing depravity" could u pleez explain how depravity in any form can be healing ?
i dont think u read the phrase properly.....its not depravity ,its"disappearing depravity".....now think about it......wont it be divinely coalescing once depravity starts vanishing......
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