Journey through time.......there i go !!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I closed my eyes , with a tranquil mind. Opened window to past, to push away the blind. Blowing hard through tunnel, was the wind of time. It brought on my face, rememberances' grime,
I opened my eyes to future, Tried slowing down the wind's pace. As I turned around in time, there was unanticipated's blaze. And i got so captured by the journey, that i forgot all about itself. I moved ahead with hourglass, hours,days,years ended into pelf.
When i woke up from my slumber, i turned & looked back in time. The beginning of my concious journey, had gone deep burried in tunnel's grime. Did this wake you up from your slumber? You gonna move ahead to past? Or you gonna go back to the future? to look back at present in the last ..... Bon Voyage my friends !
What stayed with you?
A line that lingered, a feeling, a disagreement. Great comments are as valuable as the original piece.
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Hi, i m sorry for adding this, this aint any comment on my poem. Actually after adding my poem i realised , that i needed to change my id.....since i dont wanna face identity crisis again(coz another author with this name). my id now-- Mits Jain. thanx for bearing with me!
Mita We are working on creating a minimal membership structure on the site. This will hopefully reduce some of these confusions. Let us know your thoughts thanks The Live2Read team
Mita, its a sweet poem. to live 2 read: It would take a lot of clutter off the author list if the names of the comment writers were removed
Hi Bullet, Thanx for such a sweet compliment indeed.
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