It was raining he was missing her. missing the time they had spent together the only time of his life when he felt loved
It was afternoon, nearly twilight. He had come from his office abit early today. It was a beautiful evening. She was coming to his thoughts . Actually, she was never out of his mind, he didn't miss her now ,but she was somewhere at the back of his thoughts
But today he was unable to get her out of his mind. He could stillfeel her last touch ,remember the good time they had spent togetherHe still remembered, the day she left him, it was raining.
It was also a rainy day when they had first met. It was cold and she was all wet and shivering, standing beside his flat for shelter He had welcomed her in. they shared that evening. He cooked dinner for her. They had it together. It was a quite evening, as she was, he liked her. She also had developed a liking for him as he was very nice to her. It was late and raining outside so he made a warm and cozy bed for her. She slept at his place that night. They had made a decision that they will be staying together
They got closer to each other all those months of their friendshipEvery morning she used to wake him up with her soft voice. By now he had developed her habit. Both of them were shy and reserved of kind.They used to go for long stroll in the evening after he came from work.She was his only friend and enjoyed all the attention that he gave her.Her green eyes also used to twinkle even as he used to call her nameShe stayed at his home all day and waited for him to return in the evening
One day when returned from his office after work. He called her name, it was time for that walk. She didn't reply. He started looking for her allover .she was there on the couch, asleep. He touchedher head she was hot. She was ill. He took her to the hospital. She was diagnosed with some serious ailment. He was sad as he knew thatshe wasn't going to live any longer. He grew more affectionate,spent more time with her, made her favorite food but she was growing leaner and started eating less
It was Sunday; he was about to leave for the church. He heard her moan, he rushed to see her but she was unconscioushe called the local doctor but she was dead by then. She was buried the same day. He cried for her as he was already missing her. He even skipped dinner that day
Today he will go to visit her, where she is resting in peace,pet cemetery is not really far from his house.............
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