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All my sins remembered

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Ares
·October 08, 2002·1 min read·13 comments
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It all comes back..

Cold Sweat, under a summer sky laughter ,like a sigh Such things normally kill This one gives me a high Didnt do much wrong There's so much i didnt do Now when i think of you I suddenly realize All my sins remembered

Time's come around, on my back wasted so much time waiting for attack The best thing to happen to me Now time's all i need Time's a recurring theme you dont realise it until after the scene that you still havent Long long lonely time ahead All my sins remembered

What stayed with you?

A line that lingered, a feeling, a disagreement. Great comments are as valuable as the original piece.

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erearchive~2001-2003

i didn't understand the poem. i don't hav a knack of poetry, cna u pls explain the gist to me? pls

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Aresarchive~2001-2003

All i have to say is that your own interpretation is what really counts...do let me know what you think

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erearchive~2001-2003

wat diff does it make wat i think. tell me wat u think yaar. and wat u wanted us to think

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Sauronarchive~2001-2003

it does make a difference..power of poetry lies in its subjectivity..and who can think the way others want u to think..u cant even if u tried

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Rahul Sidhuarchive~2001-2003

I am glad you share my view..

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Aragornarchive~2001-2003

hmm..sounds familiar..

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cacoarchive~2001-2003

There seem to be some inherent confusion in authors thought pattern, he potrays that in a confusing manner.

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Aresarchive~2001-2003

Atleast you made en effort to see through my thoughts....AB KHANA KHANE CHAL

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deartharchive~2001-2003

This seems to be a poem of remorse and vexation, these different emotions are mingled togehter rather maturely.

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deartharchive~2001-2003

"Now time's all i need Time's a recurring theme" This phrase in the poem is something which has the ability to stand the test of time.

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Aresarchive~2001-2003

Thank you that is a very interesting idea indeed!

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bulletarchive~2001-2003

i think the same too

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bulletarchive~2001-2003

This is the real bullet... I didn't post the comment above!!! whats going on? a lil cheating? don't use my name in your mess a*hole

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