It all comes back..
Cold Sweat, under a summer sky laughter ,like a sigh Such things normally kill This one gives me a high Didnt do much wrong There's so much i didnt do Now when i think of you I suddenly realize All my sins remembered
Time's come around, on my back wasted so much time waiting for attack The best thing to happen to me Now time's all i need Time's a recurring theme you dont realise it until after the scene that you still havent Long long lonely time ahead All my sins remembered
What stayed with you?
A line that lingered, a feeling, a disagreement. Great comments are as valuable as the original piece.
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i didn't understand the poem. i don't hav a knack of poetry, cna u pls explain the gist to me? pls
All i have to say is that your own interpretation is what really counts...do let me know what you think
wat diff does it make wat i think. tell me wat u think yaar. and wat u wanted us to think
it does make a difference..power of poetry lies in its subjectivity..and who can think the way others want u to think..u cant even if u tried
I am glad you share my view..
hmm..sounds familiar..
There seem to be some inherent confusion in authors thought pattern, he potrays that in a confusing manner.
Atleast you made en effort to see through my thoughts....AB KHANA KHANE CHAL
This seems to be a poem of remorse and vexation, these different emotions are mingled togehter rather maturely.
"Now time's all i need Time's a recurring theme" This phrase in the poem is something which has the ability to stand the test of time.
Thank you that is a very interesting idea indeed!
i think the same too
This is the real bullet... I didn't post the comment above!!! whats going on? a lil cheating? don't use my name in your mess a*hole
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