AW FUCK IT..THIS IS MY LOVE SONG..IT GOES LIKE THIS.. i sit by the fire n think, its 3 in the nite,havent slept a wink the nite is dark, cant see a star glimmer makin me forget if my eyes were open ever...
its painful to sleep, coz thats wen i lose track of reality as the curtain of dreams unfolds, n images of cherished moments awake from within me
how could you love me n leave me n never say gooodbye, how could i love you n forget you and not let a tear fall from my eye...
dawn will break in time, shatterin the cloak of the nite imperative for me to wake up, n shrug off the esoteric plight..
not evry question has an answer no matter how badly u seek in the mayhem wonder if time would make me forget that i ever lived through one of them
currents of life will drag me away from where i am not even sure been chasing a mirage for so long never knew illusions cud be so pure
u ve got to run hard to stand still so i sit here n think the pool i chanced upon in the desert was i dreamin or did i ever blink..
but there is one thing i know i can take everything in my stride if i could just get to know for once that i m not the only one who has cried.
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its nice really nice
thx mate..hope there wasnt ne sarcasm that i missed in ur comment
On a scale of 1 to 10, 10 being the highest, i'd give it a 7. So, pretty cool Good job.
thx mate.coming from u,its a gr8 compliment by crackednut on August 27, 2003 (Wednesday) honestly, after the first para i didn't really want to scroll down. the language, the mood and the writing just didn't suit me. Atleast that's not what i wanted to read. But i must add that there was sense in those words. surely a lot of effort would have gone into writing such an article, which surely must acknowledge. Keep working on the style and try leaving out those (irritating) short forms. Good stuff!
thx mate..ur suggestions r appreciated.& i sincerely hope that i dont have to write such shit again...in words of The Who.."we wont get fooled again.."
no sarcasm dear...it reminds me of smt i wrote a long time back..n still in the aftermath of that mood.
Lovely work dear, I really felt as if U were telling my story.
appreciation appreciated...hope u survived the aftermath..:)
Not really , I feel this aftermath will never be over. Atleast not in this lifetime
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