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Thinking of something bad

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Adam Roome
·June 11, 2001·1 min read
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I'm not cazy or any thing but this is my idea of pain I'm 16 years old and new to this game.. this is called THE PASSAGE

On funeral roses thorn's a newborn's spongy skin Relaxes rigidly limber.

A tear envolped by the darkness that surrounds it, Slides depositting a trail frozen in seconds.

Sown on weak tender skin thick pins which flow painfully unyielding in the icey breeze......

What stayed with you?

A line that lingered, a feeling, a disagreement. Great comments are as valuable as the original piece.

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