This poem was written when i did not believe in god... well, now i do. And please, don't plagiarize.
In God's Kingdom, Of seven continents, Six billion people, Five forces of Nature, Four walls of reality, Three free dimensions, Two separate sexes, And one bright Sun, I often wonder... Did God make Man? Or, Did Man make God?
What stayed with you?
A line that lingered, a feeling, a disagreement. Great comments are as valuable as the original piece.
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This poem made me think. The last two lines... Did God make man, or did man make God?... asks the question we have never been able to answer. It is the ultimate mystery of life.
This is a truly wondreful poem. The poetic style of counting down from seven to one is quite impressive. The last two lines ask the question i had always wanted to ask from a priest at a church. Amazing!
Hemant, This poem is simple in words, yet it is truly poetic. You did not use any fancy words unlike any poet, yet your poem says a lot. It is just like a simple cry of a child tells his mother that he's hungry. I hope this poem makes to the hall of fame of this website.
u mortals really overestimate yourselves..u cant even make single cell organism..forget bout makin god..haa haa..it seems people like you are the biggest mistakes in his creation
How are you doing Satan's curse? Thank you for your comment. However, I failed to understand what you meant by your comment. Either your comment has a deep meaning or you did not understand the final two lines of the poem. Please reply to me. honestabdul@hotmail.com
everythin i utter has a deep meaning to it.or do u underestimate the powers of SATAN..haa haa.i understand everything..even the most deeply rooted thoughts in your subconscious that your brain hasnt figured out yet..... 0KB (0 bytes)
Satans curse...not meaning any disrespect to a misguided soul but...you dont know much about cellular consciousness apparently or you wouldnt wasting your prescious time in such silliness...my suggestion to you is to spend a few years learning about yourself and meditating on the deeper meanings of life... the real you cant possibly be as destructive as you like to appear, except maybe to yourself.
Hemant, Is it coincidence that you are honestabdul@yahoo.com and Homer Simpson (who has given a good first comment for your article) honest_abdul@yahoo.com? Really long odds for this happening, isn't it? Or are you dishonestabdul@yahoo.com in disguise? But your poem was great!!! Cheers.
Hi Santosh, The reply was posted through my computer at work. Many people use this computer along with me. So, HonestAbdul stays honest. Thank you for your time and comment though. Hemant.
God's kingdom is much larger my friend ... But what or who is God, few know!
(this is Hemant/bullet) My question is not "Who is god?"... MY question is: "is god?" Also people who are interested in the proof of the existence of God, read "Meditations" by Descartes. Thank you for your reflection though.
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