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Hemant🔥
·June 14, 2001·1 min read·11 comments
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This poem was written when i did not believe in god... well, now i do. And please, don't plagiarize.

In God's Kingdom, Of seven continents, Six billion people, Five forces of Nature, Four walls of reality, Three free dimensions, Two separate sexes, And one bright Sun, I often wonder... Did God make Man? Or, Did Man make God?

What stayed with you?

A line that lingered, a feeling, a disagreement. Great comments are as valuable as the original piece.

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homer simpsonarchive~2001-2003

This poem made me think. The last two lines... Did God make man, or did man make God?... asks the question we have never been able to answer. It is the ultimate mystery of life.

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Toddarchive~2001-2003

This is a truly wondreful poem. The poetic style of counting down from seven to one is quite impressive. The last two lines ask the question i had always wanted to ask from a priest at a church. Amazing!

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Toddarchive~2001-2003

Hemant, This poem is simple in words, yet it is truly poetic. You did not use any fancy words unlike any poet, yet your poem says a lot. It is just like a simple cry of a child tells his mother that he's hungry. I hope this poem makes to the hall of fame of this website.

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satan's cursearchive~2001-2003

u mortals really overestimate yourselves..u cant even make single cell organism..forget bout makin god..haa haa..it seems people like you are the biggest mistakes in his creation

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Hemantarchive~2001-2003

How are you doing Satan's curse? Thank you for your comment. However, I failed to understand what you meant by your comment. Either your comment has a deep meaning or you did not understand the final two lines of the poem. Please reply to me. honestabdul@hotmail.com

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Satans cursearchive~2001-2003

everythin i utter has a deep meaning to it.or do u underestimate the powers of SATAN..haa haa.i understand everything..even the most deeply rooted thoughts in your subconscious that your brain hasnt figured out yet..... 0KB (0 bytes)

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Donnaarchive~2001-2003

Satans curse...not meaning any disrespect to a misguided soul but...you dont know much about cellular consciousness apparently or you wouldnt wasting your prescious time in such silliness...my suggestion to you is to spend a few years learning about yourself and meditating on the deeper meanings of life... the real you cant possibly be as destructive as you like to appear, except maybe to yourself.

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Santosharchive~2001-2003

Hemant, Is it coincidence that you are honestabdul@yahoo.com and Homer Simpson (who has given a good first comment for your article) honest_abdul@yahoo.com? Really long odds for this happening, isn't it? Or are you dishonestabdul@yahoo.com in disguise? But your poem was great!!! Cheers.

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Hemantarchive~2001-2003

Hi Santosh, The reply was posted through my computer at work. Many people use this computer along with me. So, HonestAbdul stays honest. Thank you for your time and comment though. Hemant.

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samuraiarchive~2001-2003

God's kingdom is much larger my friend ... But what or who is God, few know!

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bulletarchive~2001-2003

(this is Hemant/bullet) My question is not "Who is god?"... MY question is: "is god?" Also people who are interested in the proof of the existence of God, read "Meditations" by Descartes. Thank you for your reflection though.

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