What can i say..i'm 14 and much too young to let love break my heart..
Without you i have nothing Without you even the sun is dark Without you i can be with a million people and being alone Without you the nights and days are longer Without you my happiness turns in sadness, Without you the pleasure and enjoyment turns in pain Without you in my arms i don’t want another body to hug Without your images for my eyes, there’s no reason to see anymore Without your skin connecting to mine, there’s nothing else i wanna touch Without you everybody is nobody Without you i have lost everything Without you i dont have a shadow anymore, it ran away with you just like my heart did it too Without you , its not i cant live, it’s just that i dont want it to try Why dont you make the things easily and return to me, or think in me, start missing me and then you come back.
What stayed with you?
A line that lingered, a feeling, a disagreement. Great comments are as valuable as the original piece.
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Fourteen and profound and Love affects us all. Way to go!
simple yet sharp ....14 umm that means it must be among the 1st few words from u'r pen ...r we looking at the virgin words of another Jane Austin in the making .
Jane Austin? I thought this was too much like a Britney Spears song. Lotsa grammar mistakes. Needs work... it's also hard to believe it's honest when I've heard all these lines before. But I've been through all that, so I know it does have a painful affect on a person....
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