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its beauty and thoughtfullness
·September 03, 2000·1 min read·2 comments
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Seems even light needs darkness to redeem itself...

You may pretend its alright but not sleepy are your eyes, gloomy seems the starry light just your dreams keep you alive.

As the shadow spreads through the land you cant see the back of your hand, but the roots of courage are laid by fear and that price the dark lord will have to bear, coz someday we'll realize and the dark curtain shall disappear.

light is life,darkness is death as the sword is raised from its sheath, the orcs are slayed as Anduril shines the dogs of war start to whine.

as the dark cloak crumbles shadows hide in the light, screams of sorrow can be heard till the dark lord rejuvenates his might.

its not about right and who's wrong thats not why i'm writing this song, then why is this urge to battle so strong, guess the show must go on..

seems even light needs darkness to redeem itself...

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Emotionsarchive~2001-2003

and so does darkness need...guess both light and darkness need each other, to tell one from another..but u seem to be trying to prove one over another. And in this argument u r also saying "seems even light needs darkness to redeem itself..." which sounds like u also believe that light is supreme but then 'even light' needs darkness to redeem itself.

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Aragornarchive~2001-2003

i intended to leave some traces of sarcasm..guess they are not that obvious..and i am aragorn..the prince of peace..but one can't ignore the dark lord..can i??? The dark lord himself... by Morgoth on Wednesday September 13, @12:23PM This piece is so highly convincing,even i'm moved by its beauty and thoughtfullness. you dont need to write odes in commendation of light.The flow of ink from your pen is itself like the glistening of silmarills .

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