Words are lethal weapons, they either make or break ...
Fragile, fleeting, focused feelings Guarded, grim, guilty glances Enigmatic, eerie, expressionless eyes Tender, transcended thoughts Macabre, malicious, mocking memories Fathomless, feral fights Undying, unexplained urges Indomitable, insatiable instincts Surreal, sardonic sentiments Wisdom withers within ... Lustful, longing love Charred, consummated, claustrophobic cries Sympathetic, soulful surrender Lost, lack-lustre, life lingers ...
What stayed with you?
A line that lingered, a feeling, a disagreement. Great comments are as valuable as the original piece.
Responses2
Amazing word play managing to convey a deep meaning. You should write more stuff. Way to go!!
Poetry is inspirational and so is any piece of art ... (may be I'm going a bit to far to call my piece of inspiration "Art"!) I am glad that it has managed "to convey a deep meaning" ... to most of my readers my work is basically "jabberwocky"! I will write again when I am "inspired" ...
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