I don't know what ever i've written is a good piece or not, I just delved into my soul & has written whatever I am feeling in my heart of hearts right now.
It seems I am no longer sailing as you kept me awaiting. It's hard to believe you are far from my reach but I poise my self as you are in my every song & speach.
We walked hand in hand for while on the ways which were niether different nor alike. We shaired emotions through our silence now that became a sweet reminiscence. When I most need a friend , you were always there with a word or smile to show how much you care. Neither you said anything to me nor did I, and love happened , can't say how & why!
I never wanted much from you to do, its just when ever I want & there is always you. But now you've gone so far, as from earth is a twinkling star. Days went on & on , never tried to mope or perhaps may be I am still living in a hope. Is it wrong or right , can't elucidate my percept. but I guess I am like that.
May be your glance is now elusive, no......,knew that I became more impassive. Your memories blows away my soul, but every time feel, I am more close. How long it'll continue, I don't know, but sometimes seems it'll end up tomorrow. Like before , again breaking false illussion I find myself back to square one.
I tried hard to forget it, and then again realised, I can't...I can't help it. When will you come & I'll recuperate?? but again I'll never let you to iterate. To keep my faith ,I am still striving and that's how I am surviving. Sitting alone , looking fixedly on the way & one day you'll come,that's what I am hoping, I don't know whether you'll come or not but, I am Still Waiting......
What stayed with you?
A line that lingered, a feeling, a disagreement. Great comments are as valuable as the original piece.
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hey optimist it's a nice piece of work by you,I liked the simplicity of your langauge & I to believe that a thing can be said very well in simple rather than presenting it in form of farrago of hard words.The lines "your memories blows away my soul, but every time I feel I am more close" are authentic because the more you think of a person more you get closure to that person.
all I want to say.....thanks a lot for your appreciation, it means a lot to me.
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