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·May 28, 2002·1 min read·2 comments
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have a broken heart?

I close my eyes, My mind gains togetherness, I count my heart beats, My mind stays together... I think... A heartbeat of mine, And another thousand, To realize that, Our heartbeats together, A million of them, Don't count anymore.

What stayed with you?

A line that lingered, a feeling, a disagreement. Great comments are as valuable as the original piece.

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Nilanjana Biswasarchive~2001-2003

I understand and know what you mean.

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bulletarchive~2001-2003

Its good that you understand, cos i just felt it and never understood it. Maybe we wait too long sometimes (or count too long).

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