Indecipherable utterances of a maverick
If anyone ever makes any sense of these random ravings, do tell me..i havent got a clue what i m writing...
do birds sing in open cages, does a word mean more than pages do we ever figure out the right path do we weep in the aftermath do you look at others and sigh do we live on only when others die
the wax melts into the flame but we are never to blame even though the sun is shining we cloud our eyes coz its blinding and we need darkness to get an excuse to melt the candle ,oh so abstruse
walk on amidst the pain misplaced belief is the bane love is all around us we say even in deep caves it may
darkness has always beckoned us all to many it does enthrall darkness is glimpsed in the spark while takin a walk in life's park
it takes no wizard to figure out i m just rambling on belittling my namesakes clout excuse me friends for i ve no thoughts for in the hobbit philosophy i m caught
though we all have our shires you have to search for it between the raging fires before you get your soul charred i hope you know who you are...
What stayed with you?
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This poem really is brilliant in places - I mean look at "though we all have our shires you have to search for it between the raging fires" or for that matter "and we need darkness to get an excuse to melt the candle ,oh so abstruse" However overall, the poem failed to live upto the buildup - in the end I wasn't sure if the author got the closure. Good effort anyways
thx kreep..this was precisely the comment i would have put on this poem ...well after contemplatin a bit,i guess i ll settle for erratic "brilliance" than consistent mediocrity..cheers Brilliant utterances of a consistent maverick by Amish on June 26, 2002 (Wednesday) Both the poem and your reply deserve applause....brilliance can never be erratic and mediocrity shouldnt be consistent .the pome is among the best i have read in months see i have dubbed it Brilliant utterances....it worth it . how very right u were to observe that misplaced belief is the bane.still happy that you have observed eventually hope u understand what i mean to say...cheers!!!!
coming from you amish,who i feel is definitely the best author on this site ..this is immensely gratifying..i always understand what you mean believe me..mebbe few others do...cheers!!! lookin forward to read some of ur works soon on this site
If one tout ur creativity, then it is indubitably true coz u ve manifestly written this poem and is a diligent work. Well from these lines of ur's..... even though the sun is shining we cloud our eyes coz its blinding and we need darkness to get an excuse to melt the candle, oh so abstruse. anyone can easily construe that to a extent u succeded to gauge that we need darkness to get an excuse. But i would like to say that, start looking at sun without clouding ur eyes,then i m sure u'll never need darkness to get an excuse. Hope u got it.
i m not the only one ...staring at the sun.... the "we" in the poetry doesnt necessarily include the "me"..
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