Reflections in a fun house
Another distorted, bizarre view, but this time it's of the inside. Take a peek into the abyss
I wake up, look around me Pain, misery is all I see Wish I was asleep, till this is all over But for that, all have to be as dead as me.
I fall asleep, hatred, anger inside Throw open the doors, open wide Run out demons, leave me be But they invite a few more inside
In no state can I be free Of all in, and outside of me? Feel not , want not , be not What I am don't you see?
What stayed with you?
A line that lingered, a feeling, a disagreement. Great comments are as valuable as the original piece.
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Nice work , cybertron! Really like the efficiency of words and hard-hitting of emotions Nice to have you here!!
Thanks, Kreep, I write 'em like I feel 'em
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