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Seeing the pain in your eyes Seeing the hurt in your heart Seeing the sorrow in your soul Seeing the suffering you feel Seeing the distress you’re in Seeing the misery you awaken to Seeing the tears you cry at night Seeing the anguish at the world Seeing the torment you go through Seeing the agony it brings me Knowing I have failed you
Copyright “2000 Andrea Trenary
What stayed with you?
A line that lingered, a feeling, a disagreement. Great comments are as valuable as the original piece.
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nice. once again, just as in my previous comment, knowing *how* you have let the other person down might help me to relate to the poem better...now i just have to take your word for it...my participation is nil. However, maybe this is your style and a deliberate attempt to exclude the reader...which is all fine as long as it is what you want. nevertheless, good writing. dizzy
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