What stayed with you?
A line that lingered, a feeling, a disagreement. Great comments are as valuable as the original piece.
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Was this your dream or imagination, or is this how you percieve things...I am just curious why is it here?
well written, short and to the point...the flow is smooth considering it is free verse. But tell me why does she cut her wrist..perhaps you could have put in a line with the reason, but then maybe you deliberately avoided it to focus on the act itself. Anyways, interesting read. dizzy
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