Exceptis excipiendis accept this aspect
What stayed with you?
A line that lingered, a feeling, a disagreement. Great comments are as valuable as the original piece.
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What the $@#% does the title of this piece means ?? Can anyone please explain ;) btw the thoughts are well articulated - liked your poem
hii deja vu the $@#% means.....'with all the appropriate exception'. by the way i used this meaning in my last line of poem..so that ppl could understand. thanks for the compliment...hope to c you ..
hope u r thru with ur gre..coz if u still got some time with the word lists..even the devil wont be able to save u..verbiage sucks man..
hi sauran. devil is here to save everyone.i haven't think of verbiage in that sense. u criticized my verbiage not my thoughts or my poem as a whole.and i suppose if u r a pro devil person then u may like this one poem
Just with few exceptions how could u discard the whole institution of beliefs? A bit of wordy isn�t it? A good work..keep it up
hi rahul you must know that only one misplaced brick in the foundation of a wall can destroy the whole wall.
hii avant garde.. it is becoming a trend now a days to write agaist the conventional norms.who actually encouraged u.it made me think twise on the things u mentioned...but my claanish credos are based on firm foundation. a real food for mind..
hii insh ji i congratulate u as u r on firm foundations. asked who encouraged me....i would say my own self, free from all the bondages, prevail me to say something.my soul love to roar on the face of mystic unresolved solutions.
why do u ppl waste ur time on these things which cannot b done in any way.okaaay ,u invoked my mind but i did nothing after reading it hence ur effort is of no worth..i suppose.... waiting for ur next poem
hi ritu i just cannot help u if u r doing nothing even when ur mind says that it is essential.this idleness of mind will kill ur instinct.do something before u get vanished -garde
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