What stayed with you?
A line that lingered, a feeling, a disagreement. Great comments are as valuable as the original piece.
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Iam a student of M.Phil English. Your poem is thoughtprovoking beautifully pointing to divine love.
I am not an M Phil student .... but still this one is amazing and totally out of the world.
i think this small peom stirs something in the heart that is really big
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