What stayed with you?
A line that lingered, a feeling, a disagreement. Great comments are as valuable as the original piece.
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Nilanjana you have written this lovely little piece perfect..i wish others'd be able to see in it what i've seen and felt and appreciate the substance embedded in the travel of unsubstantiality...thank u for making me feel and fly in my own unbound space.
Yes! Amish, it's good to fly. We look for space elsewhere to fly but there is a whole universe within us and other individuals and an infinite number of lifetimes is not enough to explore them.
Nilanjana, once again, great job, i'm your fan!!! Excerpt from "The Space Between" by The Dave Matthews Band:- The space between our wicked lies where we hope to keep safe from pain... The space between whats wrong and right is where i'll be hiding waiting for you... The space between your heart and mind is the space we fill with time...
"The Space Between" - Dave Matthews Band perceives the basic idiosyncrasy of humans -to escape from the inevitable, to hide from the truth. Time is infinite and we try to measure it and we have measured it, packaged it, labelled it and sold it as "life".
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