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Letting Go Forever...

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Gursimran Arora🔥
·September 21, 2002·1 min read·1 comments
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If only I could Let go... If only I could reach out so far, That I could feel your touch once more, Just once more, breathe your fragrance, Only then can I forever let go. If only I could scream so loud, That a whisper could reach your ears, Or ruffle your silky hair once more, Only then can I forever let go. If only I could cry so much, That a tear could reach your eye, And make you miss me once more, Only then can I forever let go. If only one, of the thousand kisses, That I plant on your photograph each day, Could reach your soft lips once more, Only then can I forever let go. But I guess you and I both know, How love always triumphs over the soul, And your memories, my love, Are my hopes for tomorrow, For I can never, ever, let go.

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ashish thakurarchive~2001-2003

well, it does hold a whole lot of grahical imagery.......but the feelings lack depth in them.....it reads more like like picture drawn.....with lots of care n precision.....but lacks the charater, and steanght that reflects.......the true feel of it all. its nice for sure, but is this a practiced art for you.....or soul search of ur own self.

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