written on the spur of the moment. Just about a girl i met and thought about, while trying to prepare for my exam. umm, i'm going to work more on it later especially the rhythm.
Of her i know not much,
A few drops in the ocean,
My thirst increases evermore,
The mind restless, the ache agonizing,
The little i see, the more i want.
What stayed with you?
A line that lingered, a feeling, a disagreement. Great comments are as valuable as the original piece.
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