What stayed with you?
A line that lingered, a feeling, a disagreement. Great comments are as valuable as the original piece.
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some very beautiful and simple lines. The way i see the world: Everything inside - seen outside... everything inside - shown outside.
Thank you and yes, they are. Savanah
hi Savanah , these tears are not silly; they flow from those slice of lives that are gone and gone forever. You know what, people try to rename the tears to recall the past in different ways; the way they always wanted it to happen but then its life - it still goes on. Everytime we cant win; lets loose to situations. All the best. the LONE EAGLE Sehgal p.s. Seek the prayers for the dyin'
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