A man sittin in his Hammock with the Sea under him....his thoughts...as in my thoughts if i were there!
Lying in my Hammock,below the transparent sea
thinking about Life, this life no longer transparent to me.
Like Mirky Waters does it flow, i cannot see through it
but this water flows below, the shells i see through it.
Wishing my life was the Sea
as transparent as i wanted it to be
But shadows fall on this SEA
Shadows that dont let me SEE
This lonliness doesnt leave me alone
So i begin to moan
Sleep catches up with me
So now i let it be me
Now i get up still above the water still above the Sea
the Time for this is getting shorter, too short for me
For now I have to get up, get out from this Hammock
Leave these Waters behind, and let my Waters create HAVOC!
What stayed with you?
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