nothing here entralls me, except a pair of blue eyes..alas,i'll never be seen in them... When you know you are faking that smile and you dont even know the reason why when you see people that make u cry out and you feel disgusted by what you see all around ;
when people hurt you and u wonder why, when you hurt people and wonder why, when nothing enthralls u much except a pair of blue eyes
and you just know u cant see thru them, or ever find yourself in them, when you have know you just can’t lose this one, but deep inside you feel you have had it,
there aint no way u can win this one, cos its not even in your hands and when you feel like losing everything that you ever had,
cos you know that there is nothing worth hanging on to; when you find yourself in a tangled web , and you are afraid to see how far it goes, when the charm is gone out of life,
when the moon doesn’t inspire you to dream, and the stars don’t beckon you to join them, when you dont wanna go further , cos u know that you are in a zugzwang
and dark lies the road behind, and dark is the path ahead, where do you go!!!!! its time to go my dear,
far from this maddening crowd, far from the objects of your affections, .one last word for myself before i go, SHAME ON YOU,YOU CRAZY DIAMOND!!.... (somehow i just don’t believe it.....)
What stayed with you?
A line that lingered, a feeling, a disagreement. Great comments are as valuable as the original piece.
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WHEN U KNOW THERE IS NOTHIN' WORTH HANGIN' ON TO THEN WHY CRY THAT YOU'LL NEVER BE SEEN IN THOSE PAIR OF BLUE EYES. THE NON ACCEPTANCE OF & BY THE BLUE EYE MAKE SO VULNERABLE. EXPLAIN ME SOMETHIN', U WANNA SEE TRHROUGH THEM OR WANNA BE IN THEM COZ BOTH THE VISIONS THEN SUBJECTIVELY DIFFER.
DONT THINK U HAVE UNDERSTOOD WHAT I MEANT,BUT THEN THERE IS ALWAYS A DIFFERENCE IN INTENTION AND INTERPRTATION,OK..if u read it carefully,i m sure u wont be dissapointed..:)
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