What stayed with you?
A line that lingered, a feeling, a disagreement. Great comments are as valuable as the original piece.
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hey this is very nice ,good poetry.i like it.
Thanx a lot for yr appreciation. The simple way u said--"i like it", really made me happy .
it's an attack on the skill which clearly demarks between humans a animals ,its a blow to our cherished semantic institution...and many other things our professors type other people 'd say but yes to me it's a fact that words never say anything no matter if u are Norman lewis or an idiot like me who half the time dont get the words ....they never say anything right and more too when we want them badly perhaps that 's why i was never able to say anything to her that can convince her ahh my heart aches .......did you get what i say
Its neither an attack nor a blow. Bcoz though languages do convey the materialistic views, but sometimes syntactically and symantically correct,as well, sentences fail to convey the soul of our feelings. And even "our professor type other people" surely must have experienced this at some or the other point of life. That's another thing if they accept this fact or keep debating on the difference between humans n animals. And this is what makes the human life and mind so complex ....
Hello Mita, Your poem is very nice and touching. Keep it up.
Hi Archana, Thanks for yr appreciation and understanding the feelings of my poem.
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