What stayed with you?
A line that lingered, a feeling, a disagreement. Great comments are as valuable as the original piece.
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Wish i cud have this; then that; wanna get hurt and ... all about perceptions man, and all perceptions are due on the life you created for yourself! say what; I wish you get all you are asking for and MUCH more... rely on me me the Lone, all Alone The Lone Eagle Ankur Sehgal p.s. Seek the prayers for the dyin'
since birth I've been cursed with this curse to just curse And just blurt this berserk and bizarre shit that works And it sells and it helps in itself to relieve all this tension dispensin these sentences Gettin this stress that's been eatin me recently off of this chest and I rest again peacefully (peacefully).. coz I am, whatever you say I am I'm tired of all you ... I don't mean to be mean but that's all I can be .. That's why we seize the moment try to freeze it and own it, squeeze it and hold it Cause we consider these minutes golden And maybe they'll admit it when we're gone Just let our spirits live on, through our lyrics that you hear in our songs and we can... --------- EMINEM-----------
For words r but a means for the poet's imagination.....if words become poetry itself, there ought to be smthg gravely wrong somewhere.... my dear friend,...Big words don't make poetry, or else dictionaries would be a poet's fodder.... Let ur imagination, ride not on words but on thot..... Do not belie the name u so proudly brandish....exalt urself to it... Adios..
hobbits r gettin braver by the day..i must confess..but they were always a stupid breed.knowledge never hurts,n had u known the meaning of the words in title,u wud have given it a miss..coz this poem was never more than a piece of trash neways.. but then, hobbits r prone to this ..they come across a bend in the road,and they think they ve discovered the stairway to heaven..take it easy ,and dont get excited..its not good for weak hobbit hearts..
Aaah... ...U wud do well if u grew up into taking criticism's as learning and not as a time opportune to vent ur arrogance, which anyway always is a sign of weakness ...something u ought rid yourself off, if u want to get somewhere... anyway, no hard feelings...
AAHA..TEMPER TEMPER.... criticism my friend has a much deeper meaning than most make out..it has IMO more to do with the nuances n the subtleties rather than the obvious...callin a piece of shit by its name is not criticism worthy of taking lessons from .in fact the only lesson that i garner from this criticism,if i may dub it.is that there r people who like to take out their insecurities ..n they dont often leap before they look..n often end up in a pool of shit and i know wat i wrote was a piece of shit:) all I need's a line but sometimes, I dont always find the words to rhyme, to express how i'm really feeling at that time,but i m gonna scream till i ve half a lung...if i ve half a chance , u bet i m gonna grab it..run rabbit run... Desultory Digressions... Last entry into a diary by Ankur Sehgal on April 06, 2003 (Sunday) How many can face the fact that all they have done is useless and that there is no use apart from procreation -and what kind of a goal is that? Fucking, as the meaning of life. A goal for rabbits, for sheep, not for humans. And yet it is good enough for most. I cannot speak for all those others. ...but as far as the class around is concerned lets not argue so much into Desultory Digressions as "knowledge never hurts" (...hopefully by Aragorn(NOT Eminem)!!). had you NOT known the meaning of the words in title; there are better things to read. Its abt perception and not criticism; words are too less for poet's imagination. I can only speak for myself, and my decision is not based on weakness but on absolute power. For Eminem, his potentially controversial and undoubtedly offensive songs strike a chord with a multitude of hip-hop loyalists who believe they have little to lose and everything to gain. Am I (also) supposed to learn about EMINEM as "...had I known about --------EMINEM------- I wud have (also) given it a miss and wud have taken lesser time to understand THE reply"; I hope we are not marketing for his songs. A p
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